Eventful?
Coulda been more eventful but hehe cool
Eventful?
Coulda been more eventful but hehe cool
Not really what i expected
IT WAS PRETTY COOl Wish it had some meaning at the end...
Wow
No part 2?! it seemed incomplete but sooooooooo beast!
Amazinggg
I freakin love storiesss like thisssssssssssssssssssssss!
Idk what to think
Coulda been longer
BOOM!
Wwhen he wiped the blood of his lip...DEFF A DRAGON BALL Z moment lol
...wow
That was DUMB but the look on his face when he woke up PRICELESS!
I actually liked it
The melody haha was cool but wish it was longer SNAKES....ONA PLANE!
Umm IM COOL get at me
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