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Enraged

Posted by ChrizX - August 21st, 2009


Ive Been in rage for the past 4 days
The only way to stop it was to pray
And now i write not knowing what ima say
But the words in my head Cannot stay
So i pour out to paper
Or even this screen
Because this anger i have has made me so mean
Im better then this
And maybe i cant take it all
But someday soon
It will fall
Not because of me but because of you
Finding ways to blame me i hadnt a clue
But the only reason im up
Is cuz im revieiwing your words
The hateful things you slur are nothing but verbs
You have the sword and i the shield
You sword will dull and i wont yield
I maybe hurt
But still alive
Regardless of what you do i will not die.


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i think someone needs a nap

Eh shut it

your poem is crap,
it makes me sad.
there are people with Cancer,
so who cares if your mad.

Not a bad poem, ChrizX. In fact, I think I liked it. If nothing else, it shows that you at least put some thought into what you type, which is a pretty useful trait to have here on the interwebs.

Thanks! i appriciate that i didnt really try but ima put one up of me actually trying

Nice poem dude...

Thank you!